I absolutely adore the style, this is great. I think the only thing I could offer as a critique or criticism would be to add a smidgen more detail to the mountains in the background, just to connect it more to the already well detailed landscape.

I agree with ShilohCollie. Otherwise your layout is perfect and I immediately understood what was going on. I can tell you put a lot of work into the background too and its great aside from the smidgen lack of detail on the mountains. :3