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Breeze by LauraBev (critique requested)

Breeze (critique requested)

LauraBev

I wanted to try my hand at something anthro as well as scales, so this happened. It didn't come out quite like I wanted... I just seem to be at that point where nothing I draw is good enough, but I don't have the skills to make it better :| GAH. Guess I'll just keep practicing! And as always, critique is very welcome ^.^

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    I know that feeling, it especially hits me when I come to colour anything.

    Your wing structure looks good, which is a place where lots of folks fall down badly. The limbs and such look good too.

    My critique points would be there doesn't seem to be much mass or structure to where the wings are joining the shoulders/back and it seems to be lacking definition around where the collarbone would be.

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      Glad I'm not the only one!! Thank you very much for the critique, it was really helpful! I'll try to work on that next time. Also, sorry it took me so long to reply. <3