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The Clash Of Hunters by Kyranite

The Clash Of Hunters

Kyranite

This is my first short story, I usually write stuff a lot long than this, but end up getting bored/forgetting about it/loosing it. This story revolves around a female hunter in a forest of the Planet Pandora, she's tracking a boar when she runs into some local wildlife that's more than happy to try eating her... Hope you enjoy :)

Edit: metres now inches, credit to ACBradley for pointing out the mistake :)

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    Nice short writte..... good description adjusted at two pages........ just one doubt.... is it with humans or navi's from pandora? Good job.

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      OH, that place was called Pandora? ^^; I must research this XD (I should know since I've seen that film) but yeah, humans :D Thank you for your comment, it is greatly appreciated ^^

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        no problemo... in other details the written explains all better.

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    If I could point out one thing: "the jaws of death just metres from her face..." I think given the rest of the scene it's more like "inches?"

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      That is a stark possibility yes ^^; I'll make a correction now, thank you :3