Page 5's done. Great perspective in this one!

Art is manthomex.deviantart.com (high-res inked version here: http://manthomex.deviantart.com/art/BEACH-GROWTH-Commission-5-344306063)
Whitestar belongs to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/whitestar/
Susie belongs to slyver
Sarah belong to dogfox (His post here: http://www.furaffinity.net/view/9524316/)