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Asami Okomori [SA Style] by KokoaMinto (critique requested)

Asami Okomori [SA Style] (critique requested)

KokoaMinto

Original Upload: 18th July 2019 @ DeviantArt


My Sonic-related Fan Character Asami Ōkōmori in the traditional Sonic Adventure style.

The Japanese text reads "Ōkōmori Asami".
朝 (Asa) = Morning
美 (Mi) = Beautiful
大蝙蝠 (Ōkōmori) = Fruit bat


Sonic the Hedgehog Franchise © SEGA
Asami Ōkōmori | Artwork © KokoaMinto KokoaMinto

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    Overall very good, although her right hand is in a position that would be very painful to hold for any length of time and might actually be impossible. Try it. Put your right shoulder back, your right hand on your hip, then turn your palm forwards. It kinda hurts! I think the palm should be facing backwards here. It's a pretty minor point though, you've nailed the general style and I love the designs on her dress in particular.

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      Oh, the right arm thing might be because of the angle! Her shoulder isn't position to the back, it's just slightly raised up, but I guess since it's the Sonic Style it seems kind of off? I'm very rusty with the style in general. Was my first try of the traditional Sonic Adventure Style since 10+ years! However, I appreciate the feedback and if I ever do another Artwork like this I will take proper care of the anatomy & angles!

      Thank you lots! I'm very proud of her 2018 re-design. Since she's from an Asian-Themed land I wanted to put a lot of emphasis on it, especially with her costume. :)