Twisted Pairs - Chapter 05 - Part 2/2 by kishniev

Twisted Pairs - Chapter 05 - Part 2/2

kishniev

4 August 2015 at 13:47:45 MDT

Chapter 05 - Part 2/2

Even darker things do happen eventually. The rat is on the run as the Shapath network slowly shuts down.

Pro-tip: Gorky Togoxianis has a cameo in the few following chapters. How in the world he ended up with the admin crew?

I had to split this chapter, because Weasyl has a 10 Mb limit on the PDF files.

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    Man, that scene with the lit entertainment district sandwiched between creepy abandoned city and getting sniped at is really nice. Like the USO scene from Apocalypse Now, lovely surreal counterbalance to the surroundings. I could totally see this whole chapter done up as a big-budget Hollywood thriller.

    Love "neo-preds" too, btw. =3

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      https://www.furaffinity.net/view/14019363/ =3

      Thanks... I try. :3
      Using smartphones as hand grenades, I don't know if I saw that in a Bond movie or it just came to my mind at random. Meep. And blood flowing down the plexiglass server cover, that's totally The Watchmen symbolic right there.