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Haruka by KaiCaelum (critique requested)

Haruka (critique requested)

KaiCaelum

This is an OC of mine name Haruka Park, he is a K-pop Idol but also an introverted, MMO obsessive.

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    He is so gosh damn beautiful!!! I love the added sparkles in his hair and bracelet. I love his style too. Dare I say...he’s hot xD

    He also reminds me of a combo of Kaito, the vocaloid and a bit of Aoba, a character from this game.

    Anyways I see that there’s a clique thing, so I’m gonna put in my two cents. The only thing I can say to improve on this is when you draw hoods up in the future, be sure not to shade the very top of the hood. The reason for that, is that it makes the head of the person seem to have a flat appearance. But then that might just be the pose the boys doing.

    That’s all I can say. I’m not one to listen to for advice though because my drawings need improvement as well, but I felt like I had to do something instead of just saying what I love about it.

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      oh yeah, I know who Aoba is... -hides my figurine of him- >.>

      Anyways, i'll take those resemblances as a compliment! Kaito is my fav vocaloid so if my boy reminds people of him that's a good thing in my eyes!

      I always listen to advice, no matter who it's from, if it helps me improve then i'm all for any constructive criticisms, this is one of the few times i've ever drawn my characters wearing a hood, mainly because drawing the hair is my favourite part and i don't like covering it but i'll keep that in mind for next time! :3 Thank you for the feedback!

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        Wait so you know of Dramatical Murder!?

        Yeah that was the first thing I thought of when I saw him. Oh look it’s a fanart of my babe Kaito and Aoba. It’s like they made a baby, and this is what it and out like xD

        Wow for not drawing hoods often it’s still pretty good. The only problem was the very top of it. I’m glad that my critique was okay. I don’t ussally know much because I’m still trying to improve my work, so I’m glad that it was okay.

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          Of course i know about Dramatical Murder! :D I've read up a lot about it though I haven't actually played the game (God knows I want to) cos I can't work out how to get the translated version on my computer, i'm not a pc gamer so the instructions on how to get it working were a bit confusing and I wanted to watch the anime but i've heard all the good stuff was removed.

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            Oh I get what your saying. You could always watch th endings on YouTube....that’s how I ended up watching certain...moments. You just have to search your butt off.

            But then they could actually be removed for “mature content” when some of the stuff is nothing...

            But I haven’t played it yet, I’m more of a reader, and someone who just watches how the endings play out, cause honestly. That’s all I want to see xD the beautiful boys together.

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              Oooh yeah, but i do like to read all the fluff and build up before the juicy part, its even better if i feel like i had a hand in how things played out with the choices i picked, but I guess i could go find the clips on youtube if that's the next best thing. Just wish that it was available on ps vita or something but unfortunately these types of otome games don't get western releases.

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                Yeah. I don’t know why though. I mean, yeah it can be very suggestive. But they allow echi hentai crap to be allowed but not bl. It’s bull.

                I guess that makes since, but I always tend to chose wrong leading to bad ends. That’s not to say bad ends suck. Some are realllly good. But when I want fluffy crap, I’d rather just go to some other series.

                Also the comment thread on this has completely got off topic. I deeply apologize.