Shine WIP by Junga (critique requested)

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Shine WIP (critique requested)

Junga

January 17, 2014 at 19:50:48 UTC

This is something for portfolio review coming up next month. I could really use some feedback. Thanks!

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Jorinda on January 17, 2014 at 19:52:41 UTC

Nice perspective.
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  Junga on January 17, 2014 at 19:56:04 UTC
  
  Thanks! Foreshortening is SUPER tricky!
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Micheal on January 18, 2014 at 18:26:42 UTC

Damn, that is some awesome perspective you've got going on there! I am trying very hard to come up with constructive criticism, but my mind draws a blank. uvu;; I've gotta follow you, though, I love your style. <3
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  Junga on January 19, 2014 at 22:21:04 UTC
  
  Ahh! Thank you! :D
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Ackart on January 20, 2014 at 19:40:12 UTC

I think the perspective of this piece is really nice. However, critique-wise, I think there should be more definition of the character's right elbow - right now her arm seems to just stretch on as one large forearm right up to the shoulder.
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  Junga on January 20, 2014 at 19:46:45 UTC
  
  I actually fixed that soon after posting this haha. Thank you. :)