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Lubo Chapter 2 Page 1 by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 2 Page 1 (critique requested)

JomoOval

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At last, we officially meet the main villain.

When I first was drawing him years ago, I had a lot of trouble making him look decent at side views, but now I think I found a good way to draw his snout in those angle. I'm glad I'm getting to draw him.

Not much else I have to say about this page, so lets talk about the twins. Jim (red mask) is usually the guy up front and does things first while his brother, Tim (blue mask), follows. Which is why Jim is up at the front, feeling Dramore's wrath.

Holy crap this is the first page that does not feature Lubo in any panels.

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    Ah, so they ARE kids. Interesting. Also, spelling error, as "treatening" them might've gotten a much different reaction, haha. Also, the blank red eyes are a good touch, given the shape and pallet of Dracmore. It makes him pop when compared to all the other colors in the panel, and draws the eyes to his eyes, and then to whatever he's looking at. Beady and red is good!