Commentary:
I tried multiple things on this page. For one I actually tried drawing my own speech bubbles by hand.
I haven't done that ever since I stopped drawing comics on paper.
The other thing I tried was more Japanese text for sound effects. Because I can.
バーン reads as "baan" and it's used to makes things more dramatic.
And last, be not least, the other thing I tried as actually a new thing I've never done before. The center panel isn't bounded
by any panel borders and takes up the whole page. I think it turned out very nice and I plan on doing it again.
Here's some concept art for the forest.
http://pre04.deviantart.net/fce1/th/pre/f/2015/076/a/8/murando_forest_sketch_by_jomooval-d8m5ecl.png
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I'm actually getting a mild Sonic the Hedgehog (Archie Comics, not the games) vibe from this. It must be the way the eyes are drawn.