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Lubo Chapter 1 Page 2 by JomoOval (critique requested)

Lubo Chapter 1 Page 2 (critique requested)

JomoOval

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Still keeping backgrouns simple. But I hope I put in enough detail to make it clear they're in town. Here's what some of the town looks like.
http://pre15.deviantart.net/c551/th/pre/i/2015/065/5/f/jatui_sketch_by_jomooval-d8kpyok.png

Also trying to vary my panel sizes. I usually just leave them the same size unless I have something special planned.

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    Your practiced ease with these characters and their different poses really shows me the raw talent you've got going.
    The utter lack of backgrounds tells me that I'm not supposed to care where we are. What era? What sort of setting? Medeival? Present Day? Future? Time will tell.

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      Yeah the backgrounds aren't as important, but I need to practice them in the future