Slayer From Hell by Jin the Thicchimera (critique requested)

Slayer From Hell (critique requested)

Jin the Thicchimera

19 April 2020 at 19:30:07 MDT

Smokes in the horizon. Bullets in the air.
The slayer is at the gate...
Hell is in chaos.

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    Critique

    This is an interesting character, and interesting usage of photo-texture. However, there is so much happening that it becomes jarring to look at. There is so much going on and your eyes can't pinpoint where to be at. The excessive amount of texture can blind the viewer on what's actually happening in the drawing. You can fix these issues by keeping the snake creatures more unified to give a better silhouette and tone down the texture a bit.
    Another issue is the guns blend too much to the background that it figuratively disappears. You've kept the colors limited overall which is great but, the character needs to be seen.
    Overall, I like the creativity and the attempt to use texture like that, just needs to tone down from this extremely high energy.

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      Thanks very much for the critique, I'll definitely keep this in mind for arts next time (and maybe if/when I try to recolor this one again).