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Nalt by Jerimiahwolf (critique requested)

Nalt (critique requested)

Jerimiahwolf

Knight of Tugev, she's what's known as a Lunes- (AKA mini-woof; Think anthro crossed with the most mischievous of halflings) Both she and the Lunes race are belong to http://www.furaffinity.net/user/groggyisbest/

Here she is, girding herself for a long day of... uh... knighty stuff.

My first commissioner he grabbed up one of the $30 color spots! Check out my journal if you're interested in getting your own!

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Visual / Digital

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    Looks great

    Well, you set the flag for requesting critique, so I'll give my two cents

    One thing is, her right arm looks a bit thick …?
    Could just be me.
    Or maybe the ' dip' from the upper arm towards her elbow is too deep.

    The bandages look steel, because they are new and snow white. If this is not intended, you could go for a light yellow or brown

    Her Ear on the left looks turned a bit too far. Again, this could just be me, but I would assume the bottom left corner would be a bit farer back/ down.

    Eyes look great, concentrated & professional.

    The right side of the 'collar' on her body armor looks a bit off, manly because the backside and the shoulder wouldn't meet, unless the collar does a zigzag.
    This might be fixed with showing a bit of the collar side, like its laying in a curve.

    The Armor does hold it's form and the arms do not collapse, which does give the impression of a certain stiffness.

    I really like the armor on her legs, but, unless the shown position is the lowest (most pointed angle she can get her 'ankle joint' into) the armor might be in the way of her movement.

    If you actually read till this point: I really like this. I'm kinda nitpicking here.

    hope this is remotely helpful, sorry for wasting your time if not

    regards Nanok

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      Thank you for leaving constructive feedback! I eat this stuff up. @.@

      I totally read the whole thing, and I've got some new things to watch out for next time. Thank you~ <3