Uninvited Guest by jaro_mir (critique requested)

Uninvited Guest (critique requested)


5 August 2018 at 11:05:58 MDT

I really have no idea wtf I'm doing no more

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Visual / Digital


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    The repeating shapes as well as darkness and smallness as things get further away give an illusion of perspective. There is nothing extra to look at; no objects, smaller details, or finely developed shading and lighting make it rather boring for me. It's like drawing a bunch of squares going back into space.

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      Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I really didn't have any idea of what I was going for with this one lmao. I kind of wanted to practice shading cause I'm still really new to that but idk. As you said it's kind of boring but I appreciate your critique and I'll try to do better next time! ๐Ÿ˜…

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    I really like this it is a very detailed peice! The one thing that gets me is the lips. They just feel off to me in a way. Probably because this is a male(I'm guessing) and you have them more of a feminine lip. But overall it is a very nice peice. Keep up the good work!

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      Thank you! TwT Any advice on how to make better lips? If's someting I've been struggling with for a while. ๐Ÿ˜… Thanks for the kind words though, I appreciate it! :D

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        Just keep practicing look up pictures and videos use lots of references that's what I did! I'm not sure exactly if that helps thoughโ€ฆ