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Evening smoke by Jagal (critique requested)

Evening smoke (critique requested)

Jagal

I don't usually post sketches separately, but I just really enjoyed working on this one~
Thank you again Sokalo , I really loved the character!

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Visual / Traditional

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    I don't like smoking but I do understand the artistic use of the smoke itself. Overall this is really nice. As for actual critique, I guess the only thing I could say is maybe the lines on the railing and the background could be straighter, using a ruler etc. But...THAT is nit picky, it is very nice, has a great feel and look.

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      Me to, haha! Personally, I hate smoking, it reminds me of some unpleasant stuff...but it definitely an interesting theme for a drawing!

      Thank you very much!
      Aaah, yes, I should work on it! I keep repeating that mistake!