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Goldie's welcome back tickles by Jackthekitsune (critique requested)

Goldie's welcome back tickles
While Goldie was out on an Dave true jack was stuck by himself to plan his welcome back tickles for Goldie, "all right their we go this should be it!!" Jack said to himself as he walked through the house trying to find a place to hide. Then it hit him he would hid in the most silly place ever under the the table" yes it's perfect go,die will never look their" so as jack hid go,dies taxi pulled up "thank you for the free ride sir." A golden fox pup said as he waved good bye to the cab driver "now time to go home and see jack again!!!" Goldie went up to the door unlocked it a d was sprayed with a knock outgas, as Goldie passed jack ran up and caught the pup and took him to his room removed the foxes shirt and shoes ,socks and put him in stocks and tied the fox to the bed. "This should be enough to hold him as I tickle him." Jack said to him self, but then Goldie started to wake up
"Uhhhh what happend wait what in the world!!!" Goldie shouted but then calmed down to see it was jack who did it. So as time went by jack found his tools came back and started to tickle Goldie's armpits with his tails as he tickled Goldie's paws with a toothbrush and a feather. "Ahhhh to hear your laugh again it is so much fun to tickle you again Goldie." 
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAAH JAJAJAJAJAHAHAHAHAHACK STOHOHOHOHOOHHOOHOP PLHEHEHEHEHEHEHAEE HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA IHIHIHIT TIHIHIHIHIIHICKLES SOOHOHOHOHOHO MUHUHUHUHUCH!!!!!1" 
"Well that is the point isent it." Jack giggles a bit as he continued to tickle his little brother.
"YEHEHEHEHHEHEAHAHAHAHAHAA BUHUHUHUUUHT NOHOHOHOOHOHHOT LIHIHIIHIHHIHIHIHIIHKE THHIHIHIHIIHIHIHIHIS HAAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAH!!!!!!" Goldie thrashed about on the bed as he was tickled by his big kitsune brother "oh but why not lil bro huh, why can't I tickle you silly?" 
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA IHIIHHIIHHIIHIHIHHI LOHOHOHOHOHOVE IHIHHIHIHHIHIT HAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA INIHIHIHIHITS GOHOHOHOHOHOD TOHOHOHOHO BEHEHEHE HOME!!!!!" Laughed Goldie as he was tickled for 2 hours straight.

             THE END 

Goldie's welcome back tickles (critique requested)

Jackthekitsune

Yeah I tired Goldie again this is part of a trade :D with him :3 he's such a cute little foxy we should all go give him tickles >:3

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