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Goldie's ticklish problem by Jackthekitsune (critique requested)

Goldie's ticklish problem
One day Goldie the cute fox pup was walking down the street to his house when he is knocked out and taken to a secret facility, "uhhh what happend?" Goldie said
"You are here to be tested." A voce said over the loud speakers, Goldie then started to struggle in his bonds. "Hay let me go you weirdows!!" Goldie shouted as he continued to struggle,    "Tisk tisk such a cute foxy." And put of the shadows comes his big bro jacka and a few others. 
"What are you going to do bros?" Goldie asked with a slight annoyed look 
"We are going to tickle you." They all said as they started to remove Goldie's shoes and socks.     "Hay, you could have asked me!!" Goldie shouted at them 
"Yeah we could but we dident want to." They all said as they started to tickle Goldie's ticklish paws.
"HAHAHAHAHHAAHAHHAHAHAHA NOHOHOOHOHOHOHOHOH STOHOHOOHHOHHOHOHP PLEHEHHEHEHEASE NOHOHOHOOHT MYHYHYHYH PAHAHAAHHAWS OHOHOHOHOH GAWED STOHOHOOHOHOHP!!!!!!!" Goldie laughed and squealed cutely as the tickling intensified.
"Awwwwwww who's a ticklish puppy?" They all asked as they ticked Goldie's cute paws.
"MEHEHEHEHEHEEHEEHE BUHUHUHUT PLHEHEHEHEHEHASE STOHOHOOHOHHOHOHOHOHP IHIHIHIHIHI CHAHAHHAH THAHAHAKE IT!!" Goldie laughed and laughed as his cute paws were tickled but he the scream in hysterics as they beguin to lick is ticklish paws.
"Yummy paws Goldie!!" They all said between licks
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA DOHOHOHOHOHONT LIHIHHHHIHIHICK MYHYHYHYHYHHYYH PAHAHAHAHAHWS YHAHAHHAAHAHAHT TIGIHIIHIHHICKLES MOHOOHOHOHRE!!!!!!!!!!" Goldie now unable to struggle due to thrashing so much. The tickling went on for hours and then stopped after and they let Goldie go and he walked home a happy pup with wet paws the end.

Goldie's ticklish problem (critique requested)

Jackthekitsune

Yeah Goldie requested this, he wanted him tickled so he got tickled a d I hope he likes this

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    Ooooooooooooooh, Goldie got tickles! :D