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Shoot'm Up! - Stage 7 (Mechafrost Asteroid!) by JackChandler (critique requested)

Shoot'm Up! - Stage 7 (Mechafrost Asteroid!) (critique requested)

JackChandler

"I was blackmailed, by Inquisitor Frostburn! I should know better to trust an appliance...but..."

Queen Banana wept into her dress, torn from the battle that ended her reign of evil.

"He promised me that my people would never know hardships again, and I could rule my lands in peace until the end of my days...but then he froze everything, kidnapped my son, and told me unless I did what he said, he would never thaw my lands...please, help me!"

The Queen Banana lie there, utterly defeated at the hands of Pilot Heroperson, but it was a hollow victory, because the REAL evil was still out there.

"I will give you this, Pilot, on the promise that you save my people from that...evil metal thing! Do this, and I swear upon my royalty I will reverse every bad thing I've ever done to this land! I swear it upon my crown!"

She hands you a device, a simple metal boxlike contraption with a red button on it, but it feels heavy, and through the mesh and bolts you can see energy arcing through the circuits.

"Attach that to your thrusters and press the button, and it will take you directly to his base of operations, a metallic fortress deep in space..."


Mechafrost Asteroid...a huge rock refashioned into a metallic base of operations. Electricity and moving mechanics seem to cover every surface of it's reflective hull. GEars twist and turn, and a low hum of energy pulses ever so slightly. Against the background of the moon, stars, and space, it could almost be considered beautiful...

As you approach warily in your ship, a burst of steam blasts out, and a hatch has opened...seemingly inviting you to enter.

"I've been waiting for you, this so called....hero....ugh, speaking that word just leaves my mouth with a bad taste. Ha! just kidding, I'm made of metal, I can't taste anything!"

A holo-jector shoots a huge image of Inquisitor Frostburn; a freezer who somehow managed to attain sentience, and was able to modify himself to attain untold strength, and this freezer was definitely freezebent on ruling the world under his icy claw thumb things!

The Inquisitor's cold laugh rings loud and clear in your ears, taunting you.

"Once you're dealt with, you stupid pilot, nothing will be able to stop me. Come, meet your doom at 80 degrees below!

Steeling yourself, gripping your steering wheel and thumbing your shooter trigger to calm you nerves, you bravely maneuver your ship through the hatch. It slams closed behind you, and you shiver. Cold steel and electric lights surround you.

You have no friends here. The only way to see them again is to defeat this cold hearted evil and celebrate your victory back home!! You must win, for the sake of all of plant Ohmygosh!

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