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Double Sonnet by Irbis (critique requested)

Double Sonnet (critique requested)

Irbis

Another $9 Patreon Poem. My Patreon is over here. I'd appreciate any support.

http://www.patreon.com/irbisgreif

There's not a lot of love for poets, so I'd love you bunches if you did join up.


In this poem, I tried varying the structure of the sonnet, doubling up its length. Alternately, I've used some internal rhyme in long lines to give it more structure.

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