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Circus FatLion (critique requested)
A big fat narcissistic butterball lion finds new purpose whilst out and about.
If you would like to see more like this PLEASE COMMENT!!!!
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- Views:
- 434
- Comments:
- 5
- Favorites:
- 6
- Rating:
- General
- Category:
- Literary / Story
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you always say just the right thing you know that, makes me happy I'm doing what I'm doing.
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I think you've managed a very impressively descriptive piece here. Well done, and consider this encouragement to keep writing in this vein!
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I thank you very much for your kind words sir.
You know, you are the very reason I started writing...
First your wonderful art created so many fantasies, then your masterful writing (specifically "the barber of 26 broad street") planted the seed.
I am honored that you noticed, nay enjoyed my work.-
-Laughs- Well, I'm flattered. But please do keep writing!
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Navyraptor
So few people comment on written art anymore, it's really terrible. You have fans, though! I've always loved the tone of your stories. Plenty of descriptive flair, with a little humor on the side which makes the situations your characters get into both adorable and arousing at the same time. I hope you keep it up!