Circus FatLion by industry-standard (critique requested)

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Circus FatLion (critique requested)

industry-standard

23 July 2014 at 03:11:44 MDT

A big fat narcissistic butterball lion finds new purpose whilst out and about.

If you would like to see more like this PLEASE COMMENT!!!!

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Literary / Story

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bodybuilder butterball corpulent fat fate_knocking fatfur former fur glutton gluttony lardball lion self_indulgent_fatboy too_tight_clothes

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    Navyraptor on 29 July 2014 at 12:23:16 MDT

    So few people comment on written art anymore, it's really terrible. You have fans, though! I've always loved the tone of your stories. Plenty of descriptive flair, with a little humor on the side which makes the situations your characters get into both adorable and arousing at the same time. I hope you keep it up!

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      industry-standard on 3 August 2014 at 23:07:38 MDT

      you always say just the right thing you know that, makes me happy I'm doing what I'm doing.

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    Wolfgonewide on 5 November 2015 at 11:45:51 MST

    I think you've managed a very impressively descriptive piece here. Well done, and consider this encouragement to keep writing in this vein!

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      industry-standard on 7 November 2015 at 19:08:52 MST

      I thank you very much for your kind words sir.
      You know, you are the very reason I started writing...
      First your wonderful art created so many fantasies, then your masterful writing (specifically "the barber of 26 broad street") planted the seed.
      I am honored that you noticed, nay enjoyed my work.

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        Wolfgonewide on 8 November 2015 at 11:52:34 MST

        -Laughs- Well, I'm flattered. But please do keep writing!