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A sinners life by Hyakan66

Naziron, the most heavily populated city in the Destrian contanaint. it yields most of the strongest faction headquarters within it’s walls, and the most dangerous shadows in it’s midst. Among them are two deadly occupantes of the city that have heavy marks on their heads
Neither should be underestimated, or trifled with.

On this misty afternoon, one of the two makes a move to the city’s main foundry area.filled with common work folk, angry formen, and tight coat’s as far as the steam would let one see. What in a places like this would anyone have to gain, info, power, secrets, or all of the above. Whatever it was, someone would have it, one way or another.


The steam burst from the top of the factory shoots with a loud hissing that could be heard all around. Carts on top of carts of coal were being pushed, and pulled into the factory by the fur walker labors, all while the humans watched, and remained on guard for insubordinate. The furs work tirelessly only to be mistreated, and undermined by their human overlords. unfair wages, mistreating them, and more heinous actions. even with that many still flak to the work, for family, hope, and what life they could make.

The work bell sounded on schedule, with a high pitch screech, many sighs of relief could be heard, as the day would soon be over. As workers were ready to put their tools away a human approached a group of them with haste, and his rifle armed.

“What do you lot think you're doing?” The human spoke through his metal mask, making his voice rather gravely. he wore a black jumpsuit that meant he was an enforcer, and could deliver punishment, this put the workers on edge.

A rather large beaver In the front spoke up “ the bell sounded overseer, are day is done.”

“says who, you weren't dismissed, and besides we got orders that need to be picked up” The enforcer stated sternly.

“What? but sir..” The beaver was cut off by a swift smack with the butt of the enforcers rifle.
he stumbled to the ground, with his cheek burning from the pain, and slightly red. a few others surrounded him, trying to bring him to his feet.

The Enforcer raised his gun in their direction, and was ready to fire. “stop right there, the rest of you back to work.” The others back away slowly, and grabbed their equipment “you!” he pointed to the injured beaver “ get up, you'll unload the next shipment, alone” The beaver rose up, slightly dazed but stay able to work. “get marching, to the dock.” he put the gun to his back, and pressed him forward.

The beaver was escorted to the factory dock where the supplies were delivered by the ferry, large metal carts that travel around the foundry area, by raling. the dock was empty, when they had arrived. “that’s odd it should have been here already.” The beaver said curiously” He was then pushed with the enforcers gun.

“Quiet, here it comes.” The beaver glanced down the rails to see the cart coming in. It rolled in slowly before coming to a complete stop. the beaver step up onto the cart platform, and unlocked the side door. With all his strength he pushed the doors apart of the cart. The beaver let’s out a sigh, and then a sound of curiosity. “What is it” The enforcer said stepping onto the platform.

“um, sir the cart….it’s empty” The beaver was shoved from the side, and fell off the platform. He grunted as he hit the ground with a thud.

The enforcer was stunned, an entire empty cart, it was unheard of no one ever makes that big a mistake. He turned from it and pressed his ear communicator trying to get in contact with the overseer. he keep trying to contact him, with no success, and only becoming more angry. “dammit, now we have to send for another, and that will take forever.” The beaver raised from the dirt to see the enforcer talking to himself, and only shook his head. The enforcer looked at him” and what are you staring at?”

“Nothing sir, Nothing at all.” The beaver everted his eye’s.

“You're damn right, you waste of spaces.” The enforcer sighed, and started pacing in place. “Now i have to write up a report on this, i don’t need this shit.” “ if only you dumbass could be more useful, maybe this shit wouldn't happen.” The beaver remained quiet, paying no attention to him. “oh nothing eles to say chubby, your cat friend got your tongue?”

“No sir, just staying quiet.” the beaver put plainly

“Oh getting smart are we, show some respect fool.” The beaver turned away, with a huff. “I SAID SHOW SOME RESPECT!” He yelled pointing his rifle at him, the beaver remained quiet, he wasn't about to be bullied anymore by him. “ fine, have it your way.” He ready the rifle. the beaver knew what was to come next, he braced himself for the worst, and made pieces with his gods.

suddenly a strange growl was coming from behind the enforcer, the sound grew louder, and came closer to him. the enforcer turned around to only be meet with darkness, and the empty spaces. He inched closer with his gun pointed.

A small flash of red light shined from within, he peered at trying to get a clear look, but it faded as fast as it came. then like that a red glowing rope wrapped around the enforcers neck, pulling him into the cart. he tried to scream but his whole body had went numb. dragged into the cart his body was flung around making the whole cart shake. the sound of metal bashing against each other ranged loudly, until a sudden stop.
The Beaver shook uncontrollably, in a matter of seconds that man was just indisposed. What demon could possibly do such a thing, what monster would be so savage and brutal, and would that man be the only one. The beaver rose to his feet, still shaking, and to nervous to move.

“Calm down you big baby.” The beaver slightly jumped at the sound of a rather immature voice. From the dark of the cart a human step out whistling whimsically. He Was dressed in a hot pink tank top, and pants of the same color. He had multiple bandages wrapped around his right leg.

The beaver looked rather dumbfounded at this site, it would be impossible for any normal human to do that. “What was….”

“Don’t worry about that guy” he gestured behind himself “ He’ll be out for quite a while.”

“But…”

“Now listels bucktooth, you need go ahead, and go home.” The beaver was cut off, and slightly offended. “Because some shit is about to go down, so scurry.” The beaver wasn't about to take any chances, he made a quick run for it, and didn't look back. The human pulled a hat from behind him and put it snuggly on his head, he looked up at the factory with a sinister expression. “Now that Oden’s here, the real party can get started.”

Oden snapped his fingers, a volt of red electricity expelled from his hand running from his arm all around his body. He jump forward making incredible distance before hopping high into the air.

Oedn grabbed onto one of the steam stakes attached to the building. “Now building seven should be here,” He quickly glanced back, and forth till he noticed the large number on a building near by.

“Alright, now i just have to get in without being noticed, quietly, and quickly, like the most professional ninja.” He said with a bright gleam in his eye.


The sound of the window glass shattering echoed throughout the factory, Oden shook himself off leaving noun on him. After dusting himself off he looked around to see no soul could be seen. It looked as if the placed had not been touched for some time. The machines were rusted, and falling apart, cobwebs filled every corner, and not even the door was locked.

“What? i know humans like to make the furs work in crap conditions, but this can’t be right.” Oden jump down to the ground floor, a cracking sound started from behind him. Oden Rolled forward, a large metallic arm reached out to grab him catching nothing but air. He turned back to see a monstrous mound of metal “ A grad one strikebot now i'm just offended.”
The mechanical marvel stomped at him with destructive speed for it’s sizes. He lifted its arm, delivering a cleaving blow to the ground shaking the factory, Oden sidestep the attack, With ease, with a snap of his fingers To ropes of what looked like some type of taffy came from his sleeves, glowing with a eire red they looked more dangerous.

Oden wiped at the robot's face causing it to tumble back, he did it in quick succession, the robot slowly losing ground. Oden spune to gain momentum wiping from the side, but the robot quickly blocked it, not budging an inch. It charged straight forward once more, and punched straight at him, oden front flipped over the punch, and onto his arm. He flung one of his whips at the robot, the tip split sticking to the front of it’s face. it tried pulling it off with it;s free hand but it was too late. “Shock therapy “ The robot was suddenly filled with tons of volts, making it shake and fizzle.

Oden jump back pulling the robot forward, the mass of metal crashed into the floor with a hard crunch. It sizzled for a bit longer, before the smell of fried metal stained the air.

“If this is all they got to throw at me, they don’t stand a chance.” Oden walk away with victory well earned.

The sparked with electricity,lifting it’s metal frame with shaky movements. the glass frame of it was cracked in the shape of a spider web, making it impossible to see. The machine lifted up its arm up in the direction of the sky, air pressure was released from its joint area sending it’s arm hurtling into the air, and through the roof.

Oedn spun around to see, his face slightly sweating now. “Well that can’t be good, better find that stuff, and fast.”

Making a dash for the main office, he was stopped by the roof caving in. dust cloud filled the area. he covered his face but didn't help keep the dust from his eyes.

From the top of the dust cloud a white and gold metal fist popped out, it’s arm stretching like a snake in oden's direction. Oden was still blinded by the dust, so he did not notice the arm rocketing towards him. The arm made contact bashing him in the stomach, oedn went wide eyed as his breath was knocked out of him. Oden went rolling back until he came to a stop on his side, groaning slightly.

The arm zipped back into the cloud, it started to clear revealing another robot, but this one appeared more advanced. It shape was more human, and it’s body was covered in layers of silver, and gold. It’s face had three dots circling each other in a sort of glass case.

“Human lifeform detected.” The Machine droned out in a pre recorded female voice. Oden Step back up, holding his stomach in pain, glaring at the robot in frustration. “Lifeform extermination protocol, active.”
“Mark 5, well now i am gonna have to try.” Oden rolled his shoulder, popping his bones loudly.

The mark 5 glass cylinder glowed a blood red, a high pitched followed. Oden ready himself, pulling out his whips once more.The robot's arm dropped down with a heavy thud, digging into the floor with force.The sound of rock cracking grew louder, Oden was caught off guard By the metal hands spring from beneath him.

Oden jump of the the robot's hands into the air, the Mark 5 tilted its head upward, and expelled a beam of light from it’s eyes. Oden twisted his body barely dodging the ray only letting it singe the tip of his hair. He fell the ground, and rolled back to his feet, the robot retracted it’s arms from the ground charging up another ray. Lifting his wipe up, oden flung it around the robots head, and started pulling it toward him.

The metal monster resisted the pull, arching slightly, then yanking backwards. It lifted oden off his feet, and into it. It started spinning its head at high speed, pulling oden around in a circle. lose the color in his face. The spinning came to a halt as oedn was sent hurdling into a pile of rusted metal, Oden yelled started to yell until he began to get dizzy, after a second his face started to .

The Mark 5 turns to to him, lifted its arms up and sent the flying with rocket speed. The metallic gauntlets flew into the the pile of old metal, scattering pieces in a cloud of dust. The arms zipped back to the robots, clicking back together to a full limbs.

“Scanning for lifeform.” The robot eye shot out a vertical laser moving it from side to side to side, repeating the word scanning. it moved in closer to finish it’s search. suddenly it let out a loud ringing sound.”Two lifeforms detected, does not factor.”.

Catching it off gurde, a beast in the shape of a worm, the size of a lion spun out at it. It was covered in rubbery flesh, and tiny green dot’s reflected light from it. It had no eye’s only a mouth with large humanoid teeth, and it wore a smile of sinister intent. the robot started popping, and boping out random sounds trying to calculate. The worm opened wide, taking the machine by it’s head.

“ERROR, ERROR.” The voice became distorted as the worms jaws tightened. it flung the machine into the air with ease, it floated high above before descending back. The beast snap it’s around it’s torso, digging into the metal frame. it started repeatedly chomping, mixing it’s grotesque silva with machine oil. Finally digging deep enough the worm bit down sending the machine to pieces, scattering parts left, and right, and swallowing the rest.

The creature let out a thirst gasp, before retreating back into the cloud of dust. the worm finally dissipated into Oden’s right hand. He pushed himself off the pile smelling of old copper, and covered in dust.

“Fuck tech, those freaks over at monarch can keep the crazy shit.” He kept dusting himself off till the sound off rifles were heard. Oden turned to see a squad of enforcers pointing there guns his way.

“Hand’s up”

“Who are you?” Oden said with a silly uptight tone

“You know who we are, will be asking the questions back at the station!”

“Not you slopjockeys,” The enforce in the front look at him in questions.

From behind them a wall of fire shot up rushing forward threw the enforcer squad. They tried avoiding it, but it was to fast for them. the went up in the raging fla
“Well, that was something.” Oden said pulling his collar in a jokey manner. “so big guy what’s your name?”
me not even leaving a shred of what was once man. The flame died down low revealing a figure behind it.

It was a heavily muscled ram in some foreign robes, stood among the fire. his eye’s with a fierce blood red looking upon Oden with shallow emotion. He stepped forward through the fire becoming engrossed in it.

The fire started to swirl around the ram’s body, inch up like a viper. he raised his fist up into the air, the fire concentrated into his fist. he opened his hand, showing a raging fireball fluctuating uncontrollably. He immediately crushed it, and his body was consumed by a flame similar.

“No foreplay, just straight to the fun, like all the men who under perform.” Oden’s left eye began to radiate a red aura that trailed behind him. It dripped on the ground and opened a portal, A large abundance of eyes popped from the portal slowly creeping out. The monstrous creature came from the portal fully, a mass of eyeballs, and tentacles under it, like a brain stem.

The two stared each other down, not showing any sign of backing down. The pyromancer Stood ready, without fear of the demon he had summoned. Oden slid his hands into his pocket, his eye still glowing sinisterly. The magic energy twisted through the air so tightly making it harder to keep concentration,the only thing left was the first strike.

“ DRAW!” Oden yelled as the monster roared with a hellish screech.The pyromancer launched himself at him, with no other thought than destruction, and oden the same.

A sinners life

Hyakan66

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