Power by How2101 (critique requested)

Power (critique requested)

How2101

12 December 2018 at 21:28:58 MST

Hello, young human.

Young, weak, pathetic human.

I see you are seeking power? I understand. You have finally realized the despair of your old, useless human body. How LITTLE it can do. What WASTED potential it is.

Do not worry. I am kind. I will take pity on your hopeless, pitiful form.

I will give you powers beyond your wildest dreams, beyond that which your feeble human imagination can ever possibly comprehend.

Do not worry, the price is not high for the power you seek. All you have to do is submit.

Give in to the power. Give in to ME.

I will be yours, human. Unfathomable power to be at your every command.

Except I will command you. Your commands will be my desires.

I will keep you happy, human. And in return, you will be my host.

I will give you power, all the power you desire.

But power is just an illusion, isn't it?

Finally, an art piece by me! comments and critiques appreciated!

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    Wow. The electricry effects are awesome. I also really like that you give a little bit of a story back round to the pictures