he's coming
i wanted her to say "can we just go home and give me some time to get used to all this?" but his place is not her "home" yet so it felt awkward for logic even if it flowed more naturally
Yeah... I mean, just swapping "home" for "to your place", then that would work fine, i think :) Acclimatize /is/ kind of a big word to be using if you're... i guess, recovering from a fight/flight response type moment, and something a little simpler would work well :) Hm, or perhaps even actually run with that this /isn't/ her home, and literally have her say that first, and then where she gets cut off being her going "or your plac..." - let her correct herself, but also keep the abrupt interruption.
(sorry, i'm a part time writer, i can't help end up bogged down a bit in this kind of stuff ;) Hope it at least helps a bit :D )
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Hmm, something weird going on in that second panel... not sure entirely what to suggest with it, but it does make me think that letting her speech be maybe a little staggered would bring across the feeling of someone overwhelmed well... though, at the same time, the art does that already, so perhaps it just wants to be "[...]to your place, so i can have a little more time[...]"