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Dinosaurs With Guns page 23 by HamsterToybox (critique requested)

Dinosaurs With Guns page 23 (critique requested)

HamsterToybox

First:
https://www.weasyl.com/submission/411269/dinosaurs-with-guns-page-1 Previous: https://www.weasyl.com/submission/557130/dinosaurs-with-guns-page-22
Trying out a new page size...
I'm not sure how obvious it is that James is following him as he wants to make sure he doesn't eat her.
Also I am aware it doesn't make sense that in the last page he was getting chased for money, but now he can apparently afford to go out for a meal. Maybe he's just rubbish at budgeting...?
Anyway, sooo close to officially launching the website now. Just got to colour the cover.

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    Some chips with a side of dad's growl! The story just gets better and better.