Are you actually asking for a opinion? If yes, than I would say that brownish outline of the eye lids and the brown lips should be little sightly darker and little more shaper and less burry loose brush thing. However you're doing a great job on this painting, keep up the good work!
Oops, sorry Gotie. I thought you were dogbites that was asking for a opinion, I got you and dogbites all mixed up in the comment thing. I'm new to this site, I'm still a n00b on this site. sorry, please forgive me.
Oh, no, It's completely all right! I understand trying to learn a new site, I still get confused every now and then myself haha. I appreciate your previous comment though! and Thank you very much!!
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beautiful! wow this lighting. please teach.