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I am a professional daydreamer, though no one seems to want to hire me for that particular skill. As of late, I have found myself with nothing to do besides daydream (and deal with the harsh burdens of real life). So, I have decided to try my paw at this writing business and put some of my more coherent thoughts on paper, figuratively speaking (I am typing them out on my computer).

I am by no means a writer of any sort. I have no experience doing anything like this aside from the few mandatory English courses required by my liberal arts college. Needless to say, my work is scribbles at best. So, while I sit here at my favorite coffee shop (that ubiquitous chain with the green and white logo of a mythical fish woman) and wait for the true artists to release new tails (LOL look a furry pun) and beautiful works of art, I hope that you will take a look at my ramblings and help a beginner out.

I want to thank anyone who gives my writing a chance and a BIG THANKS to anyone who gives me any criticism and/or encouragement.

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A Bully Story Revision Upload

I'm nearing the end of finishing the revision to A Bully Story, and by end, I probably mean a couple more months at this pace. >.< Still, I want to get some eyes on it and hear what people think. Hopefully, clean it up a bit and stamp out any offensive grammar errors.

Once I can find enough time, expect a huge upload of chapters. Really looking for criticism on:
-Characters: development, do they feel stale or flat?, anything you like or don't like about them
-Flow: too slow, not fast enough, parts that lag or need more detail, chapters too long or short, etc...
-Is everything consistent?
-Does it get confusing who is talking/being talked about/the focus?
-Do the events in the story make sense? Are they believable? Does any part just not seem to fit?

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    Thanks for the watch! :)

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      NP! Saw you on twitter and I like your style. Those tummies and chests!! <3

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        There'll be more to come, I'm still ironing out managing all my accounts XD