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TEASER 1 FOR MY GAME! by Froogyfazer123 (critique requested)

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TEASER 1 FOR MY GAME! (critique requested)

Froogyfazer123

This is for my upcoming game H.U.N.T.E.D

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    SketchedFrozen

    Nu. I wanna see ur game now rip

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    Rosekat

    Dude, I had no idea you were making a game with this! I've always dreamt of making an rpg, but (supposing you are making a horror game) this looks awesome! I hope the coding goes smoothly :D

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      Froogyfazer123

      I can tell you that I might make it into a RPG at some point...
      I'll have to look into that.

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        Rosekat

        Oh cool! I use RPG maker, but I'm really bad at it haha

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          Froogyfazer123

          Same here!

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            Rosekat

            Oh that's really cool! Maybe we could help each other out :V

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              Froogyfazer123

              I mean I haven't made one in quite a while!

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                Rosekat

                ¯_(ツ)_/¯ it's understandable, I actually haven't been on it since christmas ahuehue

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    2382

    the loose wires distracting
    so I might remove at least for the image
    the green text should be at the bottom not on the side it makes it very hard to read or somewhere else
    t's interesting but perhaps darking it to nearly invisible useing gimp or photoshop
    also the ellipses should go to something not just stand on their own there like a long pause
    thank you for reading

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      Froogyfazer123

      It was just a concept art so I probably won't use it.