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Raffle Winner #1 by forsakenchances (critique requested)

Raffle Winner #1 (critique requested)

forsakenchances

Hey everybody! Me again!!

Just finished up the first place winner of the raffle @ask-genesis-the-unicorn’s piece and oooooooooooh I am so happy with how this turned out! The pose and the shading were so much fun to figure out and work on! It was fun to push myself posing wise and background wise, I really feel like it paid off!

I hope yall like it! any advice/comments are always welcome!

And as usual, ONTO THE NEXT ONE!!!!

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    I really like the shading It's pleasing. I kinda think that the lip on the bat is a little too big, But it's still an amazing piece of art!

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      thank you! I had a lot of fun when I was shading this lol and I'll keep that in mind for next time :33 thank you and also thanks for your critique :33

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    I really like this piece. It is very well drawn, and the lighting looks fantastic! The characters are also super cute! The only thing I would suggest is to add a little more light to their bodies, since right now it kind of looks like they are fused together. Although, that could make a good metaphor piece, like when a couple is so in love, they become two yet one lol.

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      Thank you so much! That really means a lot, I worked extra hard on pushing myself on this one lol and I will deff remember that, I was wondering if the bodies got a lil too dark so I will deff try to better define with more shading in the future :33 thank you again for ur critique :33 it really helps me :333

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        You're welcome! The piece looks really nice though

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    I can see the upper bodies and that tree to the left.

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      do you mean the shading is too dark of a contrast? Sorry your wording has me a lil confused lol If that is the case though I will work on better defining the contrast :33 thank you :33

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        I can only see the upper bodies and the tree on the left.