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my lesser babies by Fluffykat22 (critique requested)

my lesser babies (critique requested)

Fluffykat22

pls,,,,,love my babies,,,,

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General
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Visual / Traditional

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    Your art style is really cute, and I like the designs of these characters. One thing I suggest is to round the shoulders of the blonde girl more, and broaden them slightly. The arm to her side is a little long, compared to the other one, and you should make the folded arm thinner as it gets closer to the hand, and make her wrist a little more noticeable. You did really well with the green girl's shoulders, I just suggest drawing her other breasts, so it doesn't look off. I also suggest adding layers to her hair, so it doesn't look so flat. Other than a few shaky lines and minor coloring errors, that's all you really need to improve on. Again, I really like these characters, and you did a really good job! Keep up the great work, and keep practicing!

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      Ah i am so sorry for the late response but thank you so much!! I’ll be glad to start working on those things.