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Fluid by FiteNite (critique requested)

Fluid (critique requested)

FiteNite

Half-Orc monk I drew last night to relax myself after a rough day.

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232
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7
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Rating:
General
Category:
Visual / Digital

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    This looks really nice! The only thing that really bugs me is his left arm (our right). I tried making this position with my own hand and found it impossible to do. Otherwise, wonderful job, especially with your choice of colors~

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      Wow, actually forget that I just tried it again and did it LOL

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        Ahah yeah it seems a bit off!! I kept looking at myself in the mirror going "no, no this is how it's supposed to be..." while I was drawing it because my brain kept flaring up that it was backwards.

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          Bodies are often difficult, but looking at this again, i can make the pose with my own hand. Maybe it just looks odd to us because your character is so fluid and practiced. (;

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            I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE...

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              I think the problem is the way the upper arm flows into the lower. If you made the large curve of the triceps more gentle and stretched it down a bit toward the elbow, I think this would look more natural!

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                Yes I think you're right! I was staring at it some more last night and looked in the mirror and had that thought, though I'm not sure if it's worth going in and fiddling with it. I may tweak it a bit in the future if it keeps bothering me. Thank you!