The figures are definitely very strong here, but I feel the reddish strokes used in the background detract a lot from the piece. It seems the work would be much stronger without them and would allow the viewer to focus more on the figures, which themselves are pleasing to look at convincing in their embrace. I enjoy that they actually feel like they're wrapped around each other. My only complaint regarding them is that there's tangent where the bottom edge of the green creature's arm and the bottom edge of tan creature's elbow meet.
Apart from the bit about the background I mentioned, I think this piece is nicely done.
Ahh Thank you!
oh yes I don't really know why I did that in the bg it was just kinda for fun XD this is just a sketch~
I did see that where the lines seem to just connect e^e how dare I. Thank you for the tips!! ^^
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The figures are definitely very strong here, but I feel the reddish strokes used in the background detract a lot from the piece. It seems the work would be much stronger without them and would allow the viewer to focus more on the figures, which themselves are pleasing to look at convincing in their embrace. I enjoy that they actually feel like they're wrapped around each other. My only complaint regarding them is that there's tangent where the bottom edge of the green creature's arm and the bottom edge of tan creature's elbow meet.
Apart from the bit about the background I mentioned, I think this piece is nicely done.