I'd like to adjust Jake's hair feathers a little, and the width of his waist.
I was also wondering if I should add in his wings, but I think the drawing looks good without them.
nod nod I see what you mean. The wings could add additional layer behind which wouldn't be a bad effect. Even just having the shapes of the wings there without further definition.
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Where are you going to be adding the further detail? It looks great as is to me so I'm a little stumped. XD;;