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PLANETMIND - A Twine Game by farorenightclaw (critique requested)
So I didn't know how else to submit this than as visual artwork, please don't get mad at me admins ;3;
Anyway. I made a Twine game! (Twine is a programming platform for interactive fiction/text based games.) I'm super proud of it and I would love to hear what everyone thinks of it.
You can play it here: http://planetmind.dreamchaos.net/
Happy gaming!
PLANETMIND/game/text/etc by me!
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Whee!
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A little short in m opinion, I'd like to see what happens next though.
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Yeah, it's my first one ever so it's pretty short. Glad you enjoyed it though!
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Very immersive etude! As someone interested in interactive fiction, I'd love to see more.
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Awesome, thanks! I do plan to do more at some point :3
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Ohhh, I like the fact that the bottom options aren't the only options~
spinning~ spinning~ spinning~....-
heee :3
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I love this.
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Yay! I'm so glad!
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THIS WAS SO GOOD. It was really relaxing, I was on the verge of an anxiety attack as I played it and it made me feel so calm! My only issue is that I wish it was longer. I want know more about "we", the planet they live on [if they have one] the other nodes, maybe what it feels like to transform someone yourself [unless that is in there somewhere in the options and I missed it].
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Don't suppose this is still around?
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Should be! There was an issue with the server but it should be back up now.
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Link
Beckydog
OOO! That saves me typing the link from my cellphone! (stupid apple and it's lack of flash..) Time to play!