Your ribcage lacks definition. The torso forms right into the hips and it looks kind of wonky. 2. The breasts seems a little oddly attached. Try positioning them a little different. 3. Your hips and legs connect strangely also. Try to realize the hips and the legs are two separate joints and need to be conveyed as such.
My recommendation to you is to google images of nude models and draw them. and use www.posemaniacs.com. You want to use both because the posemaniacs is computer made and may have slight mistakes. Familiarize yourself with the body's muscles and learn that way.
And I know you've heard this enough, but PRACTICE! PRACTICE! PRACTICE! It's very important to getting good! I hope these little tips help you improve!
You're very welcome! in 2014 I'm planning to launch my own beginner's guide to drawing and things, so keep your eyes open too. ;D I'm hoping my tutorials can help people!
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My recommendation to you is to google images of nude models and draw them. and use www.posemaniacs.com. You want to use both because the posemaniacs is computer made and may have slight mistakes. Familiarize yourself with the body's muscles and learn that way.
And I know you've heard this enough, but PRACTICE! PRACTICE! PRACTICE! It's very important to getting good! I hope these little tips help you improve!