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Vine Lion by Everlost (critique requested)

Vine Lion (critique requested)

Everlost

This is a redraw of an old picture I made about 8 months ago. I'll hopefully be posting a WIP gif of this and a picture of it and the original side by side.

I'd say I made a lot of improvement between this and the original. The original had no shading what so ever, the colors were horrible, and the line work was less than exemplary. This one, however, has my first real attempt at shading fur, a much better selection of color, and, well, nonexistent lines. xD It was supposed to be a lined picture, but they just kinda disappeared after a while. And I can't say I don't like that. lol

Thanks for reading! Feel free to critique down in the comments, or just let me know that you liked it! I read all comments and reply to all of them.

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    Interesting concept, I studied the picture for a good while and tbh the only thing I see that needs any adjusting is the reflective light on the leaves.. seems a bit stand-outish to me. Perhaps lower the opacity a bit so that it doesn't stand out so much against it (maybe make it look a extra bright green rather than nearly white).

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      Thanks for the comment!

      Yeah, I never really like the light on the leaves. xD I couldn't figure out a color to use on them. I'll definitely try your suggestion, though.

      Honestly, I'll probably end up redrawing this (again) in a few months. xD I tend to do that a lot. I'm actually work on another redraw of a different (somewhat related) picture.