The pose is a tad awkward looking but hey I have trouble with them too and you did far better than I'm doing at the moment. That being said, this is really nice and you are certainly better than most.
Well thank you for the critique, I'm gonna try and use a model and/ or some sort of ref for more non-common poses, it's really helpful to get a constructive critique :3
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The pose is a tad awkward looking but hey I have trouble with them too and you did far better than I'm doing at the moment. That being said, this is really nice and you are certainly better than most.