Unfinished Stories by eecee (critique requested)

Unfinished Stories (critique requested)

eecee

28 July 2013 at 21:44:37 MDT

Unfinished stories

Negative worries

Running through our minds

Of all the broken

All the shaken

Those who've been destroyed

Falling apart

Wondering hearts

Beauty tucked out of sight

Talents all hidden

Skills forbidden

Not letting yourself shine

Unfinished Stories (c) Me

yes I wrote a poem which will be later turned to a song

and put it with a pretty pic

woop

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    Curiously, I can't seem to think of poems but in terms of songs. If I really like one, I usually find some tune for it, somehow.

    Cute feline, by the way.

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      i had a tune to it and it was a song but I dont have the chorus or anything figured out so its a poem for now. even though I usually sing poems. lol.

      and thanks! :3

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    Ugh why can't I shade the way you and other people do? :/

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      I don't know ;0;

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        *rolls on the floor*

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          I have doritos

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            I have. . .hair. Om nom nom nom.

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              i eat my own hair kinda xD