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first self portraight by Eagle GodHeart (critique requested)

first self portraight (critique requested)

Eagle GodHeart

this was supposed to be a self portraight of me.

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    May I ask, did you use a mirror when doing this, because that's a better way to do a self portrait. It's a little difficult getting into the groove of looking back and forth between a mirror and paper, but it comes easier with practice. As for the picture itself, the neck is too thick and long. We should be able to see a bit of your ears from this view point, unless your hair is completely covering them. Overall, it looks more like a cartoon version of you than an actual self portrait in the traditional sense. As I said earlier, using a mirror is a good way to do a self portrait. Though if need be, a clear picture of yourself should work just as well.

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    well for art style yes it was meant to be more anime then realistic, and no I did this all by memory, and yeah I probably should have added ears.... or adjusted the hair better..... but yeah the neck is just barely to thick and I didn't notice the length till after I posted it, but yeah thanks for the critisism.