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Blissfully Ignorant by Duntorah (critique requested)

Blissfully Ignorant (critique requested)

Duntorah

George's wife has developed some strange oddities, but he's too excited about their future baby to notice.

This is definitely the first time I've written a story this short. Usually, I let them expand and get out of hand without ever getting finished. I'll hopefully be able to stick with this trend and get more stuff up while fleshing out my longer stories. I'm still not really sure where I'm going with "Jalti's Story", but am making progress on "The Oracle" series.

Critiques are definitely welcome, as I'm trying to get into writing somewhat seriously and want to improve and develop my style.

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