Where I End and You Begin by DrFranknFurter (critique requested)

Where I End and You Begin (critique requested)

DrFranknFurter

29 June 2016 at 13:35:25 MDT

THERE'S A GAP IN BETWEEN
THERE'S A GAP IN BETWEEN
WHERE I END AND YOU BEGIN
AND I'M SORRY FOR US
THE DINOSAURS ROAM THE EARTH
THE SKY TURNS GREEN
WHERE I END AND YOU BEGIN

I AM UP IN THE CLOUDS
I AN UP IN THE CLOUDS
AND I CAN'T AND I CAN'T COME DOWN
I CAN WATCH BUT CAN'T TAKE PART
WHERE I END AND WHERE YOU START
WHERE YOU, YOU LEFT ME ALONE
YOU LEFT ME ALONE

X'LL MARK THE PLACE
LIKE THE PARTING OF THE WAVES
LIKE A HOUSE FALLING IN THE SEA
IN THE SEA

I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
THERE WILL BE NO MORE LIES
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE
I WILL EAT YOU ALIVE

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