Smoker's Breath by DrFranknFurter (critique requested)

Smoker's Breath

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Smoker's Breath (critique requested)

October 4, 2015 at 05:55:52 UTC

Nice teeth.

Paris peryton © Me

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Overfix8 on October 6, 2015 at 15:15:54 UTC

They certainly are nice teeth! Love the grotesqueness of this. The super exaggerated nose works great with that too. There's a lot of things I like actually.

I think it'd work better if the antlers were a different color from the background. As it is, it's hard to tell that they're part of the character and not just a pattern in the background. Even just a slightly lighter shade of gray would help.
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  DrFranknFurter on October 6, 2015 at 21:04:06 UTC
  
  Yeah I can only work so much with just Crayola and sharpies unfortunately!
  Mostly why the horns have a golden shine to them
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    Overfix8 on October 6, 2015 at 23:00:06 UTC
    
    You used crayolas? Damn I'd never be able to tell otherwise. Always thought crayola's were difficult to color with.
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      DrFranknFurter on October 6, 2015 at 23:59:59 UTC
      
      Oh, you'd be surprised! They can work just fine as the more expensive color utensils out there
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Angellothefox on October 16, 2015 at 17:16:14 UTC

Oh oh I think I may need a diaper if I continue looking at this
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  DrFranknFurter on October 16, 2015 at 23:23:02 UTC
  
  LOOOL