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Smoker's Breath by DrFranknFurter (critique requested)

Smoker's Breath (critique requested)

DrFranknFurter

3 October 2015 at 23:55:52 MDT

Nice teeth.

Paris peryton © Me

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    They certainly are nice teeth! Love the grotesqueness of this. The super exaggerated nose works great with that too. There's a lot of things I like actually.

    I think it'd work better if the antlers were a different color from the background. As it is, it's hard to tell that they're part of the character and not just a pattern in the background. Even just a slightly lighter shade of gray would help.

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      Yeah I can only work so much with just Crayola and sharpies unfortunately!
      Mostly why the horns have a golden shine to them

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        You used crayolas? Damn I'd never be able to tell otherwise. Always thought crayola's were difficult to color with.

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          Oh, you'd be surprised! They can work just fine as the more expensive color utensils out there

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    Oh oh I think I may need a diaper if I continue looking at this