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Beleague by DrakkarVance (critique requested)

Beleague

There are holes that uncolor on fruit

and the effervesence disassembles my heart,

but my holes won't follow

for I will hoard the dulcet of roses,

and furtively suffocate the hollow for you.

A nail-scratching shiver is lulling the light asleep;

it paralizes, chatoyant.

But I will hold my bells high

because the four winds shall sing

and I will wait, gazing into the dormant fire

as it breathes awake with a warm murmur.

The woods moan worried of the sun swallowed by clouds,

warned, I grab my bag and steal my way up their branches

to catch the tinkling fires and lights of the penumbra

before I bite my lips on the day I find coins on your eyes.

Beleague (critique requested)

DrakkarVance

A small free verse poem I came up with a few weeks ago and got around to conclude just recently after listening to Keaton Henson.

I dunno, maybe I'll write some more someday.

Glossary

Beleague: To be worried about.

Chatoyant: Like a cat's eye.

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