I say for crits, make the wing beat more forward instead of up and down motion, kind of how he's doing the upstroke. The upstroke will be more backwards that moving forwards.
But wow, this is really great. OuO I love how he goes up and down with the beats, you can really see the power there! I also like how that leg is moving too with the wing beats, adds more emphasis! <333
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Raikita
Oh dang, nice animation!
I say for crits, make the wing beat more forward instead of up and down motion, kind of how he's doing the upstroke. The upstroke will be more backwards that moving forwards.
But wow, this is really great. OuO I love how he goes up and down with the beats, you can really see the power there! I also like how that leg is moving too with the wing beats, adds more emphasis! <333