Flowers by Dominicus (critique requested)

Perfect Flower

By Dominicus

From me to you,

My love for you is red, when you leave I'm Blue.

Carnations and Roses, Dandelions and Tulips.

Buttercups and Lillys, Cosmos and Sunflowers.

If I could capture the sun for you I would,

If I could Destroy the Moon for you I would.

I know you've been through so much, but I wanna say that I'm here to make it all better.

You calm the panic in me, Your such a rarity...

Like a blue rose, you seem so unnaturally Beautiful.. I dare not pick you.. Because then you'd wither and die. I can't imagine a life without you, a life without beauty..

You see the beauty in me where these seems to be nothing but weeds..

How could you possibley let a little weed like me grow so close to you?

I need you, Fuck Sunlight, Fuck Water... I need you..

You are my nourishment... Just to gaze upon you.. To feel you..

You bring me to tears.. you are my perfect flower..

Please I know I'm not worthy.. I just wish to build a garden with you,

My perfect Flower.

Flowers (critique requested)


16 February 2013 at 21:57:36 MST

A poem I made for someone special.

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