OMG THESE CUTE DUMS
hey I saw you were asking for critique so I'm gonna give you a lil' one!
Onthe pale-coloured dog, the bottoms of both feet are lining up pretty much on the same plane. Moving the foot furtherest from the viewer up a bit would connect the dimension of what they're standing on with the pose. Especially with the grass mound being rounded, it feels like a dimensional space and the character isn't quite connecting to it.
Just a minor thought! :)
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