It's done!
My first request story!
The request was made by Frysco who won this raffle http://www.furaffinity.net/journal/7806363/
I think it turned out pretty good. I know I said i would keep it short but...I just couldn't.
So there you have it! A 10 page TF story.
I hope you guys like it! Let me know in the comments what you think. Your words, your critiques, are like fuel for me ;)

Have a great day!