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My other o.c<3 :'U
Aint he just the cutest<3 xD
And his pet Dog, dog is supposed to be an ugly little leaf chick that doesn't match at all. ^^
I honestly cannot be bothered putting these o.c's in "Characters". ;3;
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(found out you want some critique) ho ho well i got some XD
well, the first thing i saw is the left arm. on his ellbow he has some weird folds that don't fit. I think you wanted to make it right, but you made them to "big" , lets say that.
Next thing is his arm. The arm is to thin under the pullover.
The right arm is ok, because physicly it works, but the sleeve don't end at the armpit.
Maybe you just forget it or it should be like that idk.
Next (I'm so sorryyyy) would be the right wing. There are 3 feathers that are the biggest right?
so, they are facing the wrong way, because they should be facing to the right and not left, except that there is wind or they are folded.
And suddenly, i saw his pose and i'm like: "how did he do that?" . o .
i know what you are tried to do but he looks like he broke his back and can't stand normal XD
you should make it more "round" so he don't look so broken.
and IF he should stand like that , then you should change the feet position, because if he really stand like that he would fall XD
The last point would be the right knee XD
it looks like it's facing the other direction than it actually should do.So my tip is: look at some tutorials for anatomy and you might should draw people first naked (without the downparts ho ho) and then draw the clothes.
this will help to avoid anatomy mistakes ; v ;But your pcture isn't only with fails or wrong things. it actually very amazing.
i really love the color choose you took for him! they really fit and it gives the it a great eye candy ; v ;
the idea of his design is awesome and i really love it! ; v ; keep it up!-
I was more concerned with the colours than the drawing itself. x'D
The left arm is too skinny, etc etc etc~ Because I was too lazy and couldn't be bothered fixing it, I was actually very aware of my mistakes there. However, with the right one's -no armpitness- , I didn't realize until I was colouring. :'D
The pose is supposed to be leaning back, and the feet really don't match, I know. xD But I actually tried drawing them in different positions and it didn't look right at all. (Maybe is because how I drew it?)
I really don't mind if my drawings don't make sense, adds to its originality. But what you said here, I believe it'll help me to improve a lot more! :D
(I actually looked for anatomy on google, and got pr0n... x'D)Thank you so much for your critique! ^^ It means a lot since I'm new to humans<3 c':
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i'm glad that you are okay with critique ; v ; because sometimes people ca't take "bad" critique and starts to yell at them.
and i hope you get to great, that you do anatomy without thinking about it ; v ;
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amazing! ; v ;