well i tried to fix the blood issue in the last picture... you decide! did i?
definite improvement. before the blood looked more like a tear in the skin or fabric or something. the lines were just too jagged to be fluid. Now it comes off more drippy and splattered. good job using critique to your advantage!
thanks! i do try and accept help from any direction when it comes to my art, i'v had so many artists get the humpf with me because i suggested something to them, how are we supposed to learn and get better if we never listen to anyone's advice? hehe personally i just love talking about art whether it's how i'm going to improve it or what the symbolism means x3
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Oooh, this looks way better than previous one. I like how you drew blood in here, previously it reminded me of red piece of cloth or something... Dunno, really.