Animation Test by DanteAffinityXD (critique requested)

Animation Test (critique requested)

DanteAffinityXD

22 May 2017 at 17:53:06 MDT

Wow! This turned out better than expected ^_^. But it's hardly finished, it's just a rough sketch at this stage, but this is kind of a good place to stop and ask "What should I change?" And that's why I'm kinda posting this here, I'm hoping to get some art critiques about my first attempt at animation. Right now, I know I need to update the head and add details and stuff, but how are the positions and relative sizes? And are the poses right? Should I have flipped which arm was forward in the run (left leg forward, right arm forward as opposed to left leg forward, right leg forward) and is the tail swaying right? I'm also personally thinking I should add the same kind of bounce for the tail back to the head. So, totally asking for some suggestions in this!

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