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So... A New Fursona by Coonotafoofox (critique requested)

So... A New Fursona (critique requested)

Coonotafoofox

Arg! I give up on this piece! I keep thinking "I'm done," then I see something that I can improve, do it, and I'm thinking "I'm Done." Then another thing comes up then another! Now, I give up "I'm done!"

So yeah maybe a fursona change, from fox to Dox (Dog/Fox Hybrid) If I go with this change I'll be a Husky/Malamute Mixed with a Red Fox. If not then I'll choose a Husky/Fox mix...

All I know is that I love dogs too much to be just a fox.

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    I'm with ya 100% on that last line

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    Ha - I really like his facial expression.

    Critique-wise: I think the composition may have benefited if your character was in the lower right-hand third of the image instead of the lower left-hand third. As it is now, it looks like the animal is leading off-screen and my eyes want to follow it, but there's nowhere to go b/c of the crop. If the animal were on the right side, facing the same direction, the natural flow of the eye would be up the road and involve more of the background.

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      Yeah I played around with that, I liked the other side (the one I chose) better when I did the comparison though... I also flipped the image the other way, and liked the one I chose better. If I may critique myself, I messed up the shadow, as it seems to fit a much skinner dog than myself, also the size it really off and I made myself too big, in reality I'm suppose to be the size of a malamute not a human... I'm looking at me compared to the trees beside me... one last thing I notice right away is the prospective of my fursona itself, he looks if the center point should be about an inch or inch and a half lower...